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光有個漂亮的開頭還遠遠不夠哦，文章的中間部分也就是豬肚環節同樣要寫得充實瀟灑，不然配在一個光鮮的開頭下面，不但不能相得益彰反而顯得干癟無力，讓老師的印象分也驟然下降。那接下來我們就看看如何將這“大頭”部分寫得出彩。 ]GmXZ i 要在內容部分得高分，用到的技巧大約有這幾種：長短句交叉、使用插入語、用詞多樣準確生動又形象、關鍵詞靈活換用不重復、句型使用多樣表述地道 W XX08" (T8dh| 內容技巧一：華麗麗的長短句 }^Ky)** 寫長短句的宗旨，一張一弛，文武之道，一長一短，長句在前短句后，通篇長句累死讀者，通篇短句不夠刺激，長句華麗短句簡潔，穿插著用方為王道 t 4FaU7 這類句子是跟著你行文內容走的，沒有什么固定公式可以套，其精髓在于多用從句，順帶著插入一些短語進一步修飾。但一些優秀的長句你可以刻意去學，去模仿，然后靈活運用到自己的文章中去,至于短句部分言簡意賅地跟在長句后即可。下面就拿某W的Comment中的漂亮長句為例 &DX 1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is one’s inner beauty that really counts.（非限制性定從，放在句子中間修飾中心詞sentences, 顯然要比直接+aim at好得多） (nt= $|H7fn(r 2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一個非限制性定從+ 一個讓步狀語從句） }NF7"tOL t_{rKb,
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