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光有個漂亮的開頭還遠遠不夠哦，文章的中間部分也就是豬肚環節同樣要寫得充實瀟灑，不然配在一個光鮮的開頭下面，不但不能相得益彰反而顯得干癟無力，讓老師的印象分也驟然下降。那接下來我們就看看如何將這“大頭”部分寫得出彩。 *LdH/C.LIf 要在內容部分得高分，用到的技巧大約有這幾種：長短句交叉、使用插入語、用詞多樣準確生動又形象、關鍵詞靈活換用不重復、句型使用多樣表述地道 MJpTr5Vs v$/i5k cWx 內容技巧一：華麗麗的長短句 b=\3N3OX 寫長短句的宗旨，一張一弛，文武之道，一長一短，長句在前短句后，通篇長句累死讀者，通篇短句不夠刺激，長句華麗短句簡潔，穿插著用方為王道 0 3
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:ptfD 2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一個非限制性定從+ 一個讓步狀語從句） J n&>Z? @ ,?~,"IQyi[ 3. However, flows of advertisements will not only impact the producer’s image, but also make the potential customers bored and even spoil the advertising program.（not only …… but also也是寫長句時的主力 :S6 <v0`Z 軍�。� &Sp:?I- oioN0EuDk 4. Wherever they go or whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messengers of peace, representing China.（bear……in mind, 一個賓從&現在分詞作狀語） bGO_y]Pc Q[tz)99~ 5. Almost at the same time the news came that people in drought-stricken south-western China are facing horrible shortage of drinking water, people in the rest part of China joined hands to donate water and other resources, hoping to give a hand to those in trouble and be no onlooker.決不袖手旁觀（有1個時間狀語從句+1個同位語從句+1個名詞&動詞過去式構成的復合形容詞+1個現在分詞作目的狀語，be no+名詞表決不，動詞搭配又合理，可謂長句中的典范） iPNs EQ0We 第6句為某E同學Comment中的一句長句，大家把它和第5句對照著看，對照著學 a
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