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Rra7 Good Health
q}5A^QX The desire for good health is universal. Everyone wish（注意主謂一致） to have a healthy body cause （because） the（刪掉） health is the most important. It can give us drival （刪掉）strength.
sD8S2 In the society, many people don't to（刪掉） pay much attention to their health. In my opinion, we can through eating to become ours.（這句話的意思是？） It is the best way to keep our （刪掉）fit and save our money. As everyones known（as everyone knows）, the vegetables are a lot better at the health than the meals(改成vegetables are much healthier than meat). There is much (there are many) vitamins in it. The water is more important and the base on our life(刪掉，改成for our life). We shoule (拼寫)drink eight cups of the （刪掉定冠詞）water everyday. Therefore we can full of the life （be full of energy）through the method.
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