光有個漂亮的開頭還遠遠不夠哦，文章的中間部分也就是豬肚環節同樣要寫得充實瀟灑，不然配在一個光鮮的開頭下面，不但不能相得益彰反而顯得干癟無力，讓老師的印象分也驟然下降。那接下來我們就看看如何將這“大頭”部分寫得出彩。 t
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內容技巧一：華麗麗的長短句 sRM3G]nUr
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這類句子是跟著你行文內容走的，沒有什么固定公式可以套，其精髓在于多用從句，順帶著插入一些短語進一步修飾。但一些優秀的長句你可以刻意去學，去模仿，然后靈活運用到自己的文章中去,至于短句部分言簡意賅地跟在長句后即可。下面就拿某W的Comment中的漂亮長句為例 Z[(V0/[]
1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is one’s inner beauty that really counts.（非限制性定從，放在句子中間修飾中心詞sentences, 顯然要比直接+aim at好得多） ;}=4z^^5
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5. Almost at the same time the news came that people in drought-stricken south-western China are facing horrible shortage of drinking water, people in the rest part of China joined hands to donate water and other resources, hoping to give a hand to those in trouble and be no onlooker.決不袖手旁觀（有1個時間狀語從句+1個同位語從句+1個名詞&動詞過去式構成的復合形容詞+1個現在分詞作目的狀語，be no+名詞表決不，動詞搭配又合理，可謂長句中的典范） X j'7n j
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6．Even though Zhao has been handsomely compensated 650,000 yuan by government, which is expected to be more, this financial compensation still can not hold a candle to無法與……相提并論 Zhao’s 11 years’ torturous and freedom-lost prison life, thus confirming the saying that, “Money is not everything” .（讓步狀從+非限制性定從+復合形容詞+現在分詞作結果狀語+引用諺語） a S7[s6
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內容技巧二：神出鬼沒的插入語 '' @upZBJ
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