2003年醫學博士英語作文 ?Wm.'S'to
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riting Drill Dangerous Factors in Maturing VXtW{*{"
On their way to adulthood, adolescens are faced with many dangerous factors. These may include sexual encounters with HIV carriers, violence, mental and sexual abuse, drug abuse, smoking, as well as the negligence from the adults. _e3kO6X
What can doctors do to make the teenagers’ world a safer place? Perhaps we should first call for attention from the medical profession to the long ignored needs of teenagers. Some critics suggest that adolescent medicine become a medical subspecialty for more and proper attention to teenagers’ needs. Of course, there are some difficulties such as policymakers’ focus on more general practitioners whereas adolescents are poorly served by the medical community. 2,O;<9au<
Adolescents deserve primary care that is attentive to their special needs. The best way is to encourage policymakers to be interested in adolescent medicine. One of the ways for this is to require most medical students and trainees to master the skills needed to treat teenagers. ^}4=pkJ;s
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There are more and more physically ill people accompanied by psychiatric morbidity, which can be physically and mentally harmful if not treated promptly and properly. ^s&1,
However, there is a lack of psychiatric care of these patients, which has to be addressed in no time. There are some cost-effective treatments for psychiatric disorder in physically ill people. But few hospitals arrange formal services for these patients, which may not be efficient in the future. Some health service reforms have also affected the formerly cooperative relationship between psychiatrists and general hospital doctors. Pressure on beds in both psychiatry and general medicine makes the already difficult task of caring for patients with coexisting mental and physical illness harder. Besides, increased consumerism and heightened awareness of coexistence of mental and physical illness adds to demand for relevant services. Jr4^@]78o<
In view of this situation, some British psychiatrists and physicians suggested that doctors and nurses learn to identify mental problems in their patients and offer psychological care and refer for psychiatric help. In their report, they also provided some relevant knowledge and approaches to treatment and psychiatric services. 2|n~5\K|t
本文的內容根據標題便可不言自明了;患有身體疾病的同時伴有心理疾病的人越來越多,但這些人的心理護理亟需要得到科學的治療和護理。摘要中要突出這種內科病人的心理護理缺醫少藥的問題,如缺乏正規的治療和醫護人員,費用昂貴等,結論斷要包含專家就此問題提出的建議和看法。 T};fy+iq
摘要可以分成三個部分,一是引言段,引出問題;二是正文段,概述問題并加以討論;三是結論段,用專家的建議作為結尾。 Vg)]F+E
總之,摘要寫作時切忌“見木不見林”,要體現出層次感,結構要明快,不要拘泥于細節,這樣可以向閱卷老師表明你的邏輯性強,抓住了要點。