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醫學 SCI 論文寫作中的語言之美

顏寧老師的一篇文章,發表在 3 月 22 日SCIENCE 母刊上。拋開文章的內容不看,我們來欣賞一下這篇文章的語言水準。 "x)xjL  
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“The structure of the human Nav1.2-β2 complex bound to the peptidic pore-blocking μ-conotoxin KIIIA further expands the gallery of structures of Nav channels associated with peptidic toxins (Fig. 4), including the insect NavPaS in complex with Dc1a (27); the human Nav1.7 with two well-characterized tarantula toxins, HWTX-IV and ProTx-II (28); and now the human Nav1.2 with KIIIA. ” Vp'Zm:  
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“In total, three different binding modes have been observed. Dc1a, HWTX-IV, and ProTx-II are all GMTs. Dc1a projects into the cavity enclosed by all four segments in VSDII and the extracellular loop and S5III of the pore domain (Fig. 4, top right). Essentially, the pore domain provides the scaffold to anchor Dc1a, which thentraps VSDII in a particular conformational state. HWTX-IV and ProTx-II both bind to the peripheral region that links S3 and S4 in VSDII (known as site 4 for toxins). ProTx-II also sits on top of the S3-S4 linker in VSDIV (site 3). ” !)(c_ uz  
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The relatively poor resolution of these toxins is likely due to the disruption of the lipid bilayer. The membrane, reminiscent of the pore domain for Dc1a, may provide anchorage to stabilize these peripheral GMTs, which then lock the functional states of the corresponding VSDs to modulate activation or inactivation of the channel.” 亚洲国产精品va在线观看麻豆