作文備考：創造閃光點 作文亮一點！
__c:$7B/4U 作文是各類英語考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學們在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的語法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點，必定會使你的作文如虎添翼！
4x=rew>Ew 高分作文標志:
#$% 9XD3 1：是否長短句交叉；滬江四六級
http://cet.hjenglish.com z.eqOPW 2、是否會使用插入語；
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4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞；
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I 5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
OekcU% C 下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：
+Bv{A3E9 1. 適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 滬江四六級
http://cet.hjenglish.com [9a0J):w{ 2. 善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
2 Ua_7 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
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<8!mmOK1 people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)
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下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
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:q;vZ6Xd I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
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w@.E}%bwq thrilling 替換 exciting
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Uk-^n~y google 替換 search
tHXt*t zq an army of 替換 a lot of
LcE!e%3 The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
?;+=bKw0 The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
}{:H0)H* Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …
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