作文備考:創造閃光點 作文亮一點!
4A^hP![c#] 作文是各類英語考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學們在掌握了一定的作文模板,和基本的語法、詞匯、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中創造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點,必定會使你的作文如虎添翼!
;38W41d{ 高分作文標志:
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http://cet.hjenglish.com %}%D8-d}G 2、是否會使用插入語;
fU@}]& 3、用詞是否多樣,準確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;
Jc~^32 4、關鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復詞;
v\rOs+.s 5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
?Pw#!t 下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項:
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http://cet.hjenglish.com jec03wH_0 2. 善于使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
r=n|MT^O 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間,一般放在動詞,助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
S+ymdZ)xZ` 比如說: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
+'>N]|Z 3. 一定要學會換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think,
[?RLvhU| people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)
-?e~dLu 下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
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j8?$Hk I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
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